Hancock Tag

I havent done a tag in a long time but here is one of my first in a while

http://transversegfx.com/will3.jpg

The render is really choppy. Take a soft brush to the edges.

The effects on the right don't look to great either maybe just use a clipping mask splatter brush there.

Lastly remove the white box on tgfx it was the first thing i looked at and is way too distracting.

Keep trying ;)