Struck gold?

I love doing sprite tags and I think I may have done a really nice one. I better see some comments on this!

Version 1
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e1...Untitled-2.png

Version 2
http://i39.photobucket.com/albums/e1...ntitled-2s.png

Jesus someone please comment on this >.>

Hmph... It's good, I guess.

I think V2 is the best, but the effect from his hand is blocking a bit of him and that looks a tad weird... but the background and the upward motion of the effect make it look like he's going upwards which is cool. I like it, but the background might need a little more into it, but idk... kinda fits like this... It's really good though considering making sprite sigs would be something difficult for me :)

The sprite doesnt blend in on the right side, but thats hard, coz A; Its a Sprite B; It'll Look like a pixel mess, If i were you, I'd change the render

Looking good:D
Nice text!
I dont know much about sprites:P i doint like em:P but u did a good job:P

hmm effects nearby the sprite is cool enough however the bg is dull it just looks like a c4d was slapped on ;s try to add more detail there aswell

effects around the sprite are very nice..bg spice it up a bit..like dae sed..:D

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Originally Posted by Neku

Hmph... It's good, I guess.

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Next time try to give him some CNC that will actually give him some feedback on what is good. Saying it's good i guess isn't gonna help him get better.

IMO V2 is better, but it seems like there is a ton of lines. ALmost too many. they distract me a lot away from the sprite. I would try to tone them down. The Ball coment effect thing by his hands looks cool i like that.

Overall i think it needs more effects, also a Topaz filter might really help this out. Migth wanna try it.
Good text though.