New Gunz, need c&c

I'm not exactly sure about this sig. The right side of it needs some work and I really don't know how to improve it.

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e2...unzNewcopy.jpg

omg that looks amazing, tbh it looks great with the right side blank as it gives it a bit more depth. imo tone down the contrast on the left side OR add a gradient map to help it blend a little more. The render could also use a little sharpening (tiny bit).

...text was spot on

overall 8.5/10

How do these changes look?

http://i41.photobucket.com/albums/e2...nzNew1copy.jpg

they look a little better gj

sorry for dbl post (cant modify post)

i copy pasted ur sig into photoshop and made some minor changes

http://i283.photobucket.com/albums/k.../ShiroGUNZ.jpg

what i did was:

1. make a new layer and go image>apply image
2. motion blur that layer about 75% and then erase over the render and any other parts that look bad
3. add a light source: make two layers...on the first layer i added a 400px soft round brush in the corner and set to overlay then on the second i added a 250px soft round brush set to normal.
4. add photo filters and gradient maps:

Purple to orange gradient map on soft light
Red, Yellow and Blue photo filters all between 40-65%

:D