Eclipse

http://img170.imageshack.us/img170/9...ipsewj3.th.jpg

just thought id have ago as i havent made a space scene in a while

Well here are some points you should work on,

1. The planet seems to be very low quality for me pretty blurred out. Try to bring in some more details and try to see if you can increase the quality.
2. The starfield isnt bad but the entire bg is a big empty, try to add some nebulas and stuff? don't know what the stuff is? ^^
3. the sphere is a bit to i dont know how to explain a bit to fast and firm? dunno try add some more over the planet aswell.

Its not a bad job just need a bit more work :D

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Originally Posted by Daemon

Well here are some points you should work on,

1. The planet seems to be very low quality for me pretty blurred out. Try to bring in some more details and try to see if you can increase the quality.
2. The starfield isnt bad but the entire bg is a big empty, try to add some nebulas and stuff? don't know what the stuff is? ^^
3. the sphere is a bit to i dont know how to explain a bit to fast and firm? dunno try add some more over the planet aswell.

Its not a bad job just need a bit more work :D

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1.the planet was made at 3000x3000 and it is blurrier than normal because i decided to go heavy on the atmosphere and shadow because of the lack of light source from the eclipse.

2. space is big and empty :p... and didnt want to take away from the eclipse by overloading the bg

3. ermmm do you mean the black sphere of the eclipse??

and thnx for the cnc makes a change to get some good and useful comments

the background is all black to me, I have to try very hard to see stars peng :rolleyes: