New hitman sig. =D

http://i12.photobucket.com/albums/a2...890/hitman.jpg

Suggestions? :P

reinkaos
it looks very nice only the thing the c4d dominate very
maybe do a lower opacty
bud thats all really like you text btw ;)

Too empty for my taste. The focal point is on the right side of the signature, and the text is on the left, weird positioning if you're asking me :rolleyes:

I agree with rai. You should try to follow the rule of thirds a bit more.
Rule of thirds in detail
If you follow the rule of thirds, you'll realize that the eye needs more breathign room between the render and the border.

Lighting wise this doesnt really make sense to me. he has highlights all around his back, and yet you have the BG fading to black where he is. It should be bright, or atleast have a lightsource.

Text is okay however placement is pretty weird, and the line between the two bit of text is a bit old/out of style.

The c4d seems to be the most prominent thing in the sig, whihc isn't good. Try to blend the c4d in a bit more. Use clipping masks and smudging, it's just liek belnding a render.

Also you really need to wokr on blending the render. Like i said before clipping masks, smudging etc.

Finally you need some depth. This seems really flat. try blurring some of the BG to give it depth.
Not bad though i like the coloring.