Angelina Jolie

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r...eowulfsig1.png

Did another one. Feels like I'm getting there again. Some parts I don't like, others look alright.

Way too sharp and over contrasted. It's a good composition otherwise, but yeah... i can count the pixels.

-kon

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Originally Posted by konfusion

Way too sharp and over contrasted. It's a good composition otherwise, but yeah... i can count the pixels.

-kon

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Yeah, that's my main problem. Hmm.

lol yeah a bit oversharpened and stuff.
i feel u should make her face a bit more visible.

Nice sig but the sig overall is oversharpened like Immortal. said even though i still can't see the render enough :S IMO you should blur the sides and sharpen the render if you did that that sig you be pretty nice :D GJ

Dan.

Hmm, yeah, I'll correct it when I get back tomorrow evening.

Agreed the face needs to be less sharpened.
The text needs work but it isn't horrible.

To the left of the sig you can see a dark low opacity thing..What's with that? I don't really like it. It seems like it was kind of just put on there to make it more chaotic.

http://i143.photobucket.com/albums/r...Beowulf2-2.png

Did a little overhaul. Looks lot less bright, for one thing.

uit looks much better, but the shadows that change on her face is really drastic, i guess u can sorta play around with the dodge tool a bit to make it perfect man.