Venom

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http://i141.photobucket.com/albums/r...rwhitetext.jpg

I honestly can't make out what the render/focal is.
The entire sig is very dark with no focal, so that needs to be addressed here.
There also isn't much in the way of lighting.
It looks like the BG might be pretty good, but again it's all pretty dark.
I'd read up on some of the tutorials available here and maybe take your time on the next one, since it looks like you've posted 4-5 sigs within the past day.

its very dark >.<

wayy too dark.
u def. need to briten it up and make the render more visible.

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