Hammer

Damn I'm still feeling rusty, no ideas, no inspiration, i'm feeling like shit lol.
need that spark back...until then i'll keep trying.

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g1...erdudecopy.jpg

wat u guys think i'm doing wrong?

I don't think you're necessarily doing anything wrong.
I think this looks pretty good, I like the lighting effects.
May try to work in a c4d or 2...

I Agree with stud but i feel the bottom of the render should be blended abit more and its abit dark :S but overall nice sig PM me if you want some ideas for sigs xD i have plenty :D

Dan.

Brilliant lighting. Got it spot on imo.

Like the above comments, either try to add a C4D for some effects, or use the pen tool+ripple to jazz up the background.

Oh, great depth too.

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Originally Posted by Studhorse

I don't think you're necessarily doing anything wrong.
I think this looks pretty good, I like the lighting effects.
May try to work in a c4d or 2...

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thnx stud, yeah i guess i'll add in some more c4ds, cuz they're there just on screen and stuff.

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Originally Posted by zole

I Agree with stud but i feel the bottom of the render should be blended abit more and its abit dark :S but overall nice sig PM me if you want some ideas for sigs xD i have plenty :D

Dan.

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yeah i'll try to blend it in a bit then. thnx zole.

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Originally Posted by XaiXo

Brilliant lighting. Got it spot on imo.

Like the above comments, either try to add a C4D for some effects, or use the pen tool+ripple to jazz up the background.

Oh, great depth too.

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hmm penttool + ripple...i'll try mayube..i guess i'll fill up the background a bit, thnx alot xai.

S'alright Immortal. To be honest it doesn't need much, just something to bring the background to life a bit more. The lighting and depth are pretty much perfect, but the top left and the right seem a bit empty in comparison. :)

Lighting is sick. And depth is great. You nailed the text as well.
I think you need to sharpen the render a bit IMO. You could try adding in a c4d or so. Maybe intertwine it around him. that could be hard though and i know it's not your forte'.

So try adding in a clipping mask or so, it might help. The coloring looks great, and again awesome job on the depth. good job.

thnx alot papa i'll get on it.

V2 any better?

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g1...dudecopy-1.jpg

CTRL+SHIFT-N
Image -> apply image
Filter ->sharpen->sharpen

that could make it look better but i onno