A few things I would pick at myself, is the right of the picture which looks a little unfinished, and the colour on the grunge streak at the left in a lazy attempt to match with the right.
Depth, also.
Did it for a request.
C&C please
08-09-2008, 11:27 AM
Immortal.
nice smuding i really like that light effect coming out the side of his head on the left.
keep it up.
08-09-2008, 12:33 PM
Shadowz
not bad. I think you shuold remove the second focal, and add some depth by sharpening some areas, blurring others, and adding some shadows. Nonetheless pretty ok job.