Abstract Secrets

Just finished :)

http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/5...ature30qo8.jpg

quite abit of negative space but i feel its effective :)

C&C

Dan.

The composition of this is very distracting. Read up on the rule of thirds. To make this aesthetically appealling you need to have more breathing room between the edge of the frame and your subject.

Text isn't bad however below the secret part that handwritten cursive or whatever looks kind of odd. You're gonna want to fix that.
Not bad overall.