M.I.A LP: cnc please

M.I.A. is one of my favorite music artists. an lp i've been fiddling with for a while. cnc is much appreciated. thanks!

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looks nice, the text in the bubble can use some work me thinks.
this is the female rapper MIA i'm assuming?

actually if you heard the song, and like knew a tiny bit about her, you would know the text fits pretty good imo. almost a bit too much yellow though? maybe not.

me thinks that bubble is needless here.
awesome blending ;]
great job on this. ;]

no nazz i know her songs, in fact i'm sort of a fan. its just that i can't read it dammit:p

Its a bit to yellow but the effects are pretty good and good use of colors around the focal nice job here.

Sweetness. You've come a long way from your Pug sig.

well its not what she sings about, its like where she's from (who knows where) so its like a foreign text. i tihnk thats the idea, maybe im wrong

she's from england but originally from sri lanka. she's a tamil (like me)rapping about the homeworld and our struggle.

thanks guys for all the comments. yeah, you pretty much got it. and immortals right, she's sri lankan but grew up in england. i was trying to gofor a kind of graffiti look for the text, since a lot of her themes are along the urban art lines and since she is a rapper. her website gaveme a lot of the inspiration for it. thanks again!