Female Flower

Ok, here it is (promised from last week), hopefully most of you like it :)
What's good, what can be fixed/ done better?

http://www.thefraglimit.com/forum/im...9a1fce9f0d.jpg

ooo c4d extravaganza.
the text for the beautiful part bothers me a bit, the compositionis top notch tho, ur transistions from girl to c4d look nice. and if u added that tat..nice job.

What bothers, the actual text or the black top?
Thanks, yea added the tat myself :)

Edites text some.

http://www.thefraglimit.com/forum/im...9c9a1c7ba8.jpg

IMO you could keep the text font, make it whit and put it up on that black part:)

But dang thats looks awesome dude.
Really good job:)

much better now.

Thanks guys.
Anyone else, there's gotta be more than that :)

V2 ftw. But I don't like the coloring the c4d doesn't match the render. I would prefer the yellows in the c4d' to be more redish to match it.

Text looks much better though.

i hear c4d what is that and it does stuff like that Im gonna buy the program so please private mssg me with the program

Very nice image!
A little orange on the render wouldn't go amiss.

Well played man :)