Dead space

After being rusty as hell for the last few weeks, i moved away from stocks and back to renders.

http://i252.photobucket.com/albums/h.../Deadspace.jpg
Heres my result. I'm really pleased with it myself.

wow ratchet pink name <.> xD where ive been lol xD either way it looks grat bro nice depth lacks a bit of compo but i cna live with it great effects lightning overall a great quality as always i just feel text is off in this one either way lits a cool sig bro :o
edit: i get what u were goign with the negative space one the left side for the text but it kidn of throws me off a bit

text should look much more serious, like small spaced out times new roman, mabye all caps. otherwise it looks nice.

try blurring the right side.

El Fuego said a lot. :p
but why right side is.. just dont fit IMO.
I think/. make it liek left side. and add some cool C4Ds. ;]
other that that. awesome; ;]

It looks pretty decent, unfortunately I don't know what the render is.
Text could use work too.

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Originally Posted by Jeff

text should look much more serious, like small spaced out times new roman, mabye all caps. otherwise it looks nice.

try blurring the right side.

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Fix that soon and post up :)

i think it all flows, like the bg on the right vastly diff than the left, i like that alot. lol i guess i do that sometimes as well that's why. my only concern is the text, it should be a bit more serious like jeff sed. that's it. nice work man.

V2:
http://i252.photobucket.com/albums/h...Deadspace2.jpg

i was thinking more like

d e a d
..... s p a c e


spacing helps.

the blur, I dunno. looks good either way really.

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Originally Posted by Jeff

i was thinking more like

d e a d
..... s p a c e


spacing helps.

the blur, I dunno. looks good either way really.

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http://i252.photobucket.com/albums/h...Deadspace3.jpg

Better?