Something new.

I don't know, I'm not really liking it, it came out to chaotic imo.

http://i196.photobucket.com/albums/a...ecklercopy.png

If you dont like it, then keep at it till you do. You should feel a sense of pride when posting something you did

I just wanted to see, What people thought of it, and what it was lacking.

well to me it looks over sharpend in places and it lacks some background. maybe a bit overcontrasted too? im not sure.. its definitely not too chaotic to me =/

a bit oversharpened and
sorta empty on the bg IMO

I agree it's pretty empty and seems like you over sharpened the splatterings.

One of the things that probably bothers you also is not seeing his face. It bothers me a bit XD. Not too bad.