Peacock

http://i150.photobucket.com/albums/s...eacockcopy.png

Text needs work, Not liking the blending to much looks like you could have done better imo, Lighting is ok but could be better.And some of the c4d is overlaping on her shoulder.

Tooms, wtf?
I just can say that you can do WAYYYY better.

oh man Garis.....what needs work? BG? depth probably?

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Originally Posted by Garis

Tooms, wtf?
I just can say that you can do WAYYYY better.

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This doesn't help the artsist at all. Tell him how it can be fixed or something.

The text needsa lot of work. TBH i think it's kind of killing the sig for me. Make it smaller and use default fonts.

The lighting is off. It shouldn't be so high up in the sig. It should be more trowards the middle side of the sig. I would change it if you can.

the effects over her shoulder don't really work, the blending isn't your best eitheri think you just need to get more flow to your effects.

Cool idea though, the render is nice.