Ironman - Revised

I did a ironman back then, i remember i took the same render, and tried a different version.
I like the product. I guess it could use some touch ups. but thats y u guys are here.
tell me wat i could do to fix it up:D.

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g1...nmancopy-1.jpg
http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g1...onman2copy.jpg

remove the clip on his left arm its distracting, apart from that i love it.

ok i'll try. if its the one on the top left thats part of the render.
if u mean the bottom left then ok.

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Originally Posted by Immortal.

ok i'll try. if its the one on the top left thats part of the render.
if u mean the bottom left then ok.

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Yeah his left arm.
One at bottom.


Looks hawt apart from that :D

thnx ratchet:D

Love the text, and smudging. Maybe add a lightsource? Other then that, it's really nice.

remove the splatter on the bottom right jsut seems like it doesnt belong/pullls my attention from the main source. the one at the top also takes away from the light source coming down over his shoulder.

i'll try dat flothy, tho the one at the top aint a clipping mask splatter, its a c4d.

It's tough to see that c4d man. Make it easier to see. Right now he doesn't have a ton of blending with him. I like the clipping mask shatter effects but he still isn't reaslly blended. Work on making him flow with the BG a bit more.
COincidentally you also have to work on your flow of this sig. I see like none tbh. If you add some effects streamlining to one way or somethign i think it would be much cooler. Not bad though i think the rest is really cool, especailly the coloring red + blue = hard color combo.