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CnC please
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The blue to the left, Doesn't suit the render at all, Would have been better if it was a different color, Th effects around the master chief are alright a Little sloppy but not bad, You also lack depth and where's the text? D=
Try reading some tut's on flow, Blending, Text, Etc..
I would specifically recommend a tut by Papa Or rachet they are very helpful and very easy to follow^^