Ichigo Tag

CnC Please

http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/n...subwaycopy.png

effects are nice.
but I think sig is too bright., I mean BG
that that the focal is too dark.

I like this good work.

Not to shure on the text tho placement could be a bit better.

I like the depth of this tag a lot.

V2 added some clipping masks and some extra depth

http://i301.photobucket.com/albums/n...bwayV2copy.png

nah i like v1 much better

i like the change in lighting
gives a dark feel to ichigo
nice mood and feel to it

plus i think the splatter/clipping mask in v2 are too much in areas ^_^

but yes work on text placement
try to make it look more like graffete on the wall
(spell check*)

nice work though

0.o and can you paste the link to that bg

nice 1 dude:)
there's a good flow and depth

Keep it up

This is very cool. I like everything about it. trhe idea is perfect as well. Nice hidden text too, next time try a stroke-outline on your text, it will make it look more like graffitti.

I think you should darken the back of the train car. RIght now it's way too bright and really draws my eye to the center of the sig away from the render.
IMO you should just paint a bit of black on it or something. Overall though it's pretty nice.

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Originally Posted by †john316†™

nah i like v1 much better

i like the change in lighting
gives a dark feel to ichigo
nice mood and feel to it

plus i think the splatter/clipping mask in v2 are too much in areas ^_^

but yes work on text placement
try to make it look more like graffete on the wall
(spell check*)

nice work though

0.o and can you paste the link to that bg

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here ya go
http://s301.photobucket.com/albums/n...Graphic_16.jpg

wow your best yet IMO
u should darken up the train a bit IMO, a bit too dark.
but that idea and everything is great.
a few touches and it'll be great.

wow nice man I like very nice ^^ i like the way you blured out the bottom half of the sub to make ichi stnd out more ^^