My first, criticize me :D

I know it's crappy, i could really use some advice.
I'm pretty noob at this, but I'd like to get better.
So whadda ya say?
Any advice for me, guys?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...orruptionF.jpg

Also, heres my first sig
it still feels pretty noob to me
anything at all would help me out
:D

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...6/AxelSigF.jpg

evan [[EPIC]]

Well first off this isn't a sig, I'm pretty sure you already know it but just to be sure..

I think to make it look more legit you should use as many c4d's. Use stocks of landscapes or something. Having just plain c4d's a bit sloppy.

Also i'm not really sure what the deal is with the red c4d behind her. Is it supposed to be a wing? If it is u you could try just pen tooling out a wing next time or use a stock one.

Overall i think you just are limiting yourself to c4d's way too much and you should try to expand yourself to other stocks.

Nice concept, but I think Papa has the right idea for it.

yeah, it's an LP right?
sigs are what you guys have under your replies
i'm not gonna make a sig until I'm pretty decent at this
thank you for the feed back :)
so you're saying I should try to use more stock landscapes?
As apposed to using so many c4d's?



evan [[EPIC]]

Yeah that is exactly what he is saying + i agree with him but i like its concept alot if you got a real angel wing of a render of stock and then all random landscapes in the squares it would be an awesome LP but maybe make it bigger :S?

wouldn't the quality get worse if I stretched it?
but I totally agree, it would look much better if it was bigger :p

and I'll go look for real wings and more landscapes right now!
should I get rid of every c4d? or just keep a few?

Personally i don't like the C4Ds But what ever looks good to you :)

Yo if your going for the angel wing idea well then you need these.

Link
http://spiritsighs-stock.deviantart....e+-in%3Ascraps

Its a brush set

Some othe stuff looks really kool, just gotta check out the blending a bit more. The wing idea is a really kool concept, nice try on that 1. Good stuff overall Evan.

Also this is 1 of my real life friends :D, thx for going easy on him.

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Originally Posted by SonicX360

Yo if your going for the angel wing idea well then you need these.

Link
http://spiritsighs-stock.deviantart....e+-in%3Ascraps

Its a brush set

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it didn't load as brushes for me
it loaded up as images on my pc
did I do something wrong? (obviously haha)