My first sprite

Here it is:)

http://i38.tinypic.com/nzljzm.jpg

Changed it up a little bit

http://i36.tinypic.com/103eo8h.jpg

Better?

i don't know really much about sprites, but maybe a little empty at left and right corner? :) But as i sayed before, i don't no sprites.

wow ..the effect on ur sprite is really nice i like it ..but maybe some more in bg ..its a bit empty to be sure.^^^keep it commin

Really great for a first. Need lighting though.

i'm prolly gonaa edit it
so fill up the bg and make some lightning;)

is the new one any better?

I dont know.
dont feel this one is really awesome.
effects over the sprite is nice, nice bright green effects., but that way I feel the BG is too dark. you need to do just the sides darker a bit, the the briher space bigger.
handwritting text could be here. I think that way you get better sig then. :p
also I would prefer 1px white border here.
but overall looks really nicee and amazing :p
good job flatty.