Typography~

This is typography work for my GFX class.
We had to use the terms, "The use of type as a visual element."
Enjoy:
http://xjtrx.deviantart.com/art/Typography-101291461

very chaotic text is practically unreadable the use of planes and depth is flawed and overall colors need work buut the idea is slick and with more work this could become a really good piece maybe reading a bit on the use of typography would help a bit because when working with text there is allot to take in consideration as well as a large piece

ive used couple diffrent techniques on there. What should mellow it down? I know it seem chaotic but i don't know what to move or delete or add o;? Also appreciate the comment man, if u can give me an idea that would be awesome :D