The Camera's Rolling

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...RollingF-1.png

my first bw
eh.. needs work, but i kinda like it
CnC please :D

here's v.2:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...RollingF-2.png

good try, love the ideas!
BUT~! Try to bring out more depth Evan it's oversharpened. Text placement is great btw. For depth just darken some places w/ blurr to bring out the depth. I'll show u what i mean 2 morrow when you come over. Good sig overall bro.

nice idea ..u could do it relly great with a bit more depth!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...RollingF-2.png

i'm new to the whole blur for depth things
howd I do on v2?