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THis is a bit too bright machiavelli. I have a hard time seeing anything. Now in this case a white border would have been better.

since it's so light peoples eyes will automatically go to the darkest thing. right now it's the border, but before that it's the Hair. WHich you want. SO get rid of the black border, try to darken that blown out region a bit and i think it'd be pretty solid. Nice blending and effects.

Text is nice as well.