The Essence of Beauty

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...s/EpicEOB1.png

I can't decide on how to put "The Essence of Beauty" in there
I can't find an appropriate text for some reason

so I know this one needs work
so come on guys, CnC Please?
:D

Less smudge, erase some parts on top of the render.
IMO you should place it in her right side(your left) next to her hair.

hmm
bad texture to it
bad in general look to it
seems to clattered and chaotic

not great use of c4d
too much smudging
no extra lighing
bad flow

keep working on it man

u had way better outcomes that this..
its blurry and the bg is too simple..
i miss a text on thisone ...

u done better works

Lew, i'm not sure I get what you mean...?

and i'm working on text ecko
thanks for the replies guys :D, very helpful