new joker sig, think i did text well

here is my stock. tried to work on text, smudging may be a bit messy. CnC please. thanks

http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/d...ercoolcopy.jpg

I dunno why But I like it...Is the text the one lew shared? jellyka?Maybe a little less darker on the sides would do.:)

yeh the text is from lew"thanks btw", ill try cleaning it up a bit around the cheeks.

phantomx even if you do like it, you must say a thing you like about it, simply saying you like it will not help the artist in anyform.

I like this overall i have a few crits though.
The render seems a bit blown out on the forehead. Now you probably couldnt control it because it was probabaly like that before, but just incase you did do it.

Second the BG seems really flat. Get some depth in there. Add a c4d and blurr it or something right now its a render and a smudged BG.

The text i must say is pretty good, however you seem...hesitant to overlap the text onto the other text. You can do that ont worry. Put the tekken text over top of the swooshy things right beneath the joker text it'll look a lot better and it'll look nicer.

Not bad though overall. You did do the text well nice.

:) I like this one alot. In my humble opinion its almost perfect. Nice choice of the Joker stock image. I like that you used a character from DC comics. The text font could be bigger in my opinion. Maybe found a "crazier" font or something. I hope my reply helps you improve your artistic skills. peace

Thanks alot guys, i will work on it a bit more and try and see what i can improve. the comments always help.

I like it, 7/10

because in my opinion its a bit plain? the bg is like a bit flat. Well done tho:D