sry was bizzy working on mah ps =P
i think the lighting is okay, its a bit sudden though, the change from the light to the darkness. maybe spread that out a little more. theres not a lo t going on, the effects are pretty subtle. it looks nice, but im feeling it could use some more effects--mostly i dont rly feel the abrupt lighting. if you fix that, i think it would look much better.
liek the text though =]
good job
11-08-2008, 08:57 PM
tunafish69
I agree with soggy. simplicity is a great tool, but too much of anything can break a sig. The text kind of distracts my eyes from the focal, maybe try moving it a little more to the left? Also, what's up with the top right? It looks like the sky in the back just ends and fades to black (hehe, metallica).
Also, my name is Dan too!! xD
11-09-2008, 01:18 PM
Fork
All your sigs look the same man, but not bad a little empty.
11-11-2008, 06:37 AM
Immortal.
could be done better i think.
this render could have muxh more done to it?
its a dramatic pose..work with it:p
keep it up.
11-11-2008, 12:31 PM
ChinaRed
Great render. I think a change in font/colour of the text could work wonders :)