Call of Duty

Just entered a comp over at the Battlegrounds section of the forum and wanted 2 know what you thought of my tag we had to use the render that is in there :S lol

http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/5...ature75gy0.png

C&C Please

Thanks
Dan.

The text is pretty cool, try getting the call of duty closer together. The lighting is a little bright, try to erase with a 200px soft brush at like 10% til it dims a little.

Otherwise, good job Dan! :)

Thats pretty cool zole I like it.

Would like to see it cropped on the left side to reduce the dead space.

any more comments?

The lightning is heading from the wrong direction. Text should be bigger & call should have another font. Background is nice but you need to add more to it. A solid Cinema 4 Dynamic would be nice. Set it to luminosity erase some parts & it would be really good. Put it on the right. The tag seems noised a bit. Other than that it's not bad.

pretty much sums it up. also the random scatter marks really dont fit in.

You have an awesome sort of style, the darker edges, with the VERY central focal point. I like it but you could reduce the negative space a bit just by clipping the side off the image. :D

i agree with all the above.
but, i do like the gritty effect of the sig, suits the war theme really well.

Try a new style man,I like this,but I've seen a lottra sigs from ytou in this style.Anywayz I like this sig.Good lighting.text could be better.:D

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Originally Posted by Suddu

Try a new style man,I like this,but I've seen a lottra sigs from ytou in this style.Anywayz I like this sig.Good lighting.text could be better.:D

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its ok if he keeps the same style up....
if it ain't broken dun fix it.
just try to make small changes to the style a bit at a time.