Shinobi

Twas deleted.

Hmmm.

It looks like you have 2 light-sources. The render is way to bright, it literately makes my eyes hurt to look at it quick. Maybe add a little depth? Try adding some effects rather than lines.

Well theres only 1 lighting source, its just cut in half by the dudes head..... And as for the effects, im not really good w/ them so I have them in the background, and the lines are just there because idk i put them there. Well I guess I'm done.

Keep it there, and then try to fix it, you don't have to delete it.