Biggie Smalls

a quick one

http://obrazok.eu/files/x9jcaepziivxs7og2lzk.jpg

comments :)

For me the first one looks more like a WIP..sorry

Too much empty space in there. You're also missing a light source

SUddu is exactly right. THis is a WIP. You just gotta go finish it.
I don't really understand why you cut him off at the head though. COMpositionally that breaks a lot of rules and really is unpleasing.