Gears

Well I figged I could try a sig for it, but it didn't turn out like I would have wanted. I kno the render is like Immortal's =/ but I couldnt find a better one for gears 2, so I had to do what I had to do lol. Well I'd like to make it better, since I was gonna see if I could enter it into a competition on another forum, but I'm not sure if there's much I could do lol. The coloring is just wrong to me...

V1
http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/2293/28531099vx8.png

V2
http://img376.imageshack.us/img376/2465/61605933yn0.png

V3
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/945/41918801zq4.png

Any ideas? Or just normal CnC is good too :p


EDIT: Added a less saturized verz. Not sure if its better or not, eyes havent gotten used to them yet lol

http://img247.imageshack.us/img247/7668/64912280oq7.png

Looks good I like the less saturation vers but deleat the gun part of that layer to make the coouring better.

Changed around some stuffage, I think it might look a lil better since its not so bright

http://img122.imageshack.us/img122/238/44947561ty3.png

Loose the text, it would look way better.

i agree with JTR the text isn't working with it right now. Loose the text and it's look awesome. I liek the smudging and the depth overall pretty good job.