ironman - vertical

V1

http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/m...l/ironman3.png

V2'

http://i297.photobucket.com/albums/m.../ironman4s.png

my first vertical, C&C is appreciated:(

ok yeah the red at the bottom doesnt fit i dont think and the text on the 2nd version looks very similar to the ice age text lol

so yeah if i was u id make the red more silvery and try get a metallic looking font or effect for the text =]

nice job on the effect at the bottom but i agree with just another guy there, make it blue or some sort of color like that, maybe silver. Also, the text is nice in the second one imo but they're both kinda hard to read, not that you should make them bigger cause its fine like that but maybe some other coloring/a 1px stroke or drop shadow to make it easier to read...

I dunno, don't listen to me... I have a headache and so me squinting at some sigs to see the nice details hurts mah brainz! XD gj