gave another shot at 1 of these.
http://xtremeassault.com/images/dinosaur copy.jpg
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12-09-2008, 11:31 AMStudhorseRageware
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12-09-2008, 05:54 PMDale
Nice, i would use a soft eraser on the edge of the dinosaur, low opacity. This will help remove the very fine line surrounding it.
Also, i like the broken glass, nice and subtle :D
Maybe some highlights on the cracks just to make them stand out a little?
All in all. Nicely done, and a little different to everything else =) -
12-10-2008, 02:12 AMratchetnclank
I love this except for the text. It doesn't fit imo.
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12-10-2008, 07:41 AMStudhorseyea, the lines around the dino were worse, but i got rid of some of it. I'll try your suggestion. Thanks.Quote:
Originally Posted by Dale
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12-10-2008, 07:43 AMStudhorseMaybe i'll try something different.Quote:
Originally Posted by ratchetnclank
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12-10-2008, 08:20 AMratchetnclankQuote:
Originally Posted by Studhorse
Maybe a little too realistic is wrong font and out of place.
Rage ware needs to be kerned closer together imo and use a more dull red for rage.
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12-10-2008, 11:17 AMHelix
I like it a lot.. but I feel like there should be more emphasis on the computer.. if possible.. it is after-all what you're advertising... not dinosaurs
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12-10-2008, 03:37 PMPapaAgreed. I thinkt he plants in the BG give thatr feeling off. Make it a more sleek looking BG to go witht he computer.Quote:
Originally Posted by Helix
THis is okay but nothing to unique. Make the galss stand out more witht he shatters. A little highpass aorund the edges might help. -
12-11-2008, 01:50 AMPtka
I don't really like the colours but the effect is quite cool.
Make the text a duller red, so that it doesn't stand out TOO much. :D
Love the computer, and the BG looks pretty nice too.
