Music is life!

http://i298.photobucket.com/albums/m...islifecopy.jpg

its a wip,I need more ideas,think I'm not adding random shit here?

Cncc! worjkking on a concpt here

Well tbh sud it looks like you are...reasons....

The picture has a good depth to it but the images you have added are just flat and dont suit the picture at all.

I like the idea of black and white to colour that works well.

quality's not that great. you should try cutting out the images better.

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Originally Posted by lasergoPEW

quality's not that great. you should try cutting out the images better.

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Ahhh it looks really awesome except for a few things.
First: The cutting isn't great, you just keep missing these white spots all over the pictures.
Second: It does look a bit flat and just things are pasted onto this picture, not thought-out well enough.
I really like the concept and the coloured lines look really nice, but LP's take more time, you just have to slow down and think about how things look and what you are putting on.

Your first Parkour one was EPIC, and now you have slightly degraded to random pasting, just think back to the flow and the images that you choose. :D

Nice concept, needs quite a bit of tuning, just get back on track!!!

Good luck!!!

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Originally Posted by Ptka

Ahhh it looks really awesome except for a few things.
First: The cutting isn't great, you just keep missing these white spots all over the pictures.
Second: It does look a bit flat and just things are pasted onto this picture, not thought-out well enough.
I really like the concept and the coloured lines look really nice, but LP's take more time, you just have to slow down and think about how things look and what you are putting on.

Your first Parkour one was EPIC, and now you have slightly degraded to random pasting, just think back to the flow and the images that you choose. :D

Nice concept, needs quite a bit of tuning, just get back on track!!!

Good luck!!!

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^ this.

i don't wanna repeat the others so ill ask something else.. what canvas size do you work on suddu ?

Great concept but it needs more power... imo more hard-vector-lines to create flow and more of a surreal looking scene... I like the idea and this is a good draft

I get the concept. WHere music is it's colred everywhere else it's black and white. But this concept would work much better on a landscape artwork.

The cutting is bad, honestly you need to learnt he pen tool if you havent alreayd and stop being slopy.

The effects aren't exactly fantastic either. The lines don't really make sense drawing your eyes off to the outside of the LP.

Finally the text coloring whats with that. I get you were tryign to make it colorful and kind of retro at the same time. But you can't color some lines and not the others. You should either do like 3 colors at most or 1.

Overall i think you are getting lazy and just pasting things together. You really need to work on pasting things up. Look at this style on deviantart and see what makes them work, how they do it, it will help you immensly.