crysis

quick one
comments?:)
http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/6423/crysiskb3.jpg

smudging is good but it really needs c4d effects and depth.

Your text needs serious work too.

Good smudging but not much flow, it's a bit chaotic with the random smudges.
As RnC said, the text isn't great, remember KISS (Keep It Simple Stupid) :D when it comes to text.
Not much to say, just keep on working at it!!! :D

Good smudging.
Text placement is perfect just needs to be blended in a bit.

yeah the text is horrible, can someone post me here link for some good text tutorial please?

i tried to make some depth, add effects, light source and change text
v. 2 better?
http://img265.imageshack.us/img265/2661/crysis2hb7.jpg