Got Bored Waiting For GF

Hey It's my Girlfriends birthday and she is getting ready to come here so we can go out and i'm bored waiting so i made this quick tag, nothing special.

C&C Please :D

http://img175.imageshack.us/img175/8...ature81ep2.png

Thanks
Dan.

zole. You aren't listening to our cnc at all.

Stop adding black to the bottom!!! AND Stop bluring the bg.

Argh this is very frustrating. I'm gonna flat out say this two you, the way your signatures have developed over the last two months, you were better before then. You have really gotten worse over the last 2 months, because you refuse to beleive in the fact that painting the BG is not liked and that blurring is bad.

First of all you need to sharpen the render. You need to brighten up the sig all together as well. it's way to dark right now. The text needs work as well. The joker font is really lacking and you lowered the opacity like halfway. Make it lower or don't lower it at all.

Overall i'm not impressed at all.

ok right next tag im stopping everything to do with dark and mysterious i was just bored xD

1 comment jesus do people not like me haha

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Originally Posted by Papa

zole. You aren't listening to our cnc at all.

Stop adding black to the bottom!!! AND Stop bluring the bg.

Argh this is very frustrating. I'm gonna flat out say this two you, the way your signatures have developed over the last two months, you were better before then. You have really gotten worse over the last 2 months, because you refuse to beleive in the fact that painting the BG is not liked and that blurring is bad.

First of all you need to sharpen the render. You need to brighten up the sig all together as well. it's way to dark right now. The text needs work as well. The joker font is really lacking and you lowered the opacity like halfway. Make it lower or don't lower it at all.

Overall i'm not impressed at all.

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Now I can't really say much because you just explained everything.
I like the liquifying in the background, I personally think you over-sharpened.
I think you shouldn't blur so much, at least, don't be afraid to have your tags less blurred. The render doesn't really stand out. maybe dodge his face at the right size, to make it look like the lighting shines down onto him better.
(i'm at college and the cpus here have low quality so I may judge awfully wrong)
Kinda dark at the bottom while the light is shining there, which makes this look better in the left corner and a little bit in the right.

papa said it all really.