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I'm here with another sig, CnC please :)

http://i38.tinypic.com/hrhh5e.png

That looks really great.
Awesome flow.
Nice C4d placement.
Good lighting and hot colour scheme.
A bit dark in some places, maybe try blurring some stuff at the front.
Really nice job. :D

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Originally Posted by Marx911

I'm here with another sig, CnC please :)

http://i38.tinypic.com/hrhh5e.png

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wow yeah, I love what you did, can't really say anything harsh, maybe it needs to be lightened. a tut would be very appreciated:D

Nice overall. Movethe text closer to the center, tone down the gold on her boobs (i think thats what that is). Other than that, sweet work. nice depth.

right not the colours are really.... meh

Add some Gmaps and photofilters to spice this sucker up, the flow is great though.

Bonesma - next time you comment please say something of importance to help the artist in some way, that way you aren't just spam commenting. We specifically gaurd against it in the rulebook so please stayt away from it.

I like this sig but theres a few things its missing. First off you need a lot of contrast. All that chalky white in the BG. All that ontop of the render, you can make this look rly sleek with some good contrast.
Great lighting in this thats solid. the c4d placement is too, and i like the coloring. the text is pretty brutal. I think you were trying to make it look more "full" over int hat area but it didn't rly work. Move it towrads the render so it's right next to it/overlapping. THen change the font to a techy one.

Overall not bad, but needs work.