Troubled

Used the past SOTW stock for some inspiration.
What you guys think?

http://i55.photobucket.com/albums/g1...oubledcopy.jpg

I like it a lot, nice c4d placement and lighting and excellent depth, however..... that text is destroying it for me. ITS SO GIGANTIC, HOLY CRAP. I like the font and coloring, just... you know... size it down.... It's a challenge to even take my eyes off of it.

Oh and maybe add in a gradient map to color code it a bit more.

I agree whole heartedly. Too much text. AAAAAAHHH. Really distracts from the focal. Overall though, it's a nice piece, slightly lacking in depth, but solid. Fix the text and you're golden

Text scares me, but the rest is cool.
Liking the colours, they are nice, and the placement of your C4D's is epic, as always.
Sticking a gradient map on there would help bring everything onto one tone, more or less, and sizing down the text would be good. :D
Nice job!

first of all, this is huge. Why so big? its much easier to fill up a sig with effects if its smaller.

Secondly that text is HUGE. make it smaller heres no need for it to be like 72 px.

I liek the effectc 4d but the red line shave no point in being in there and rly dont work. IMo get rid of them.

TBH i think this sig is mostly a WIP. I dont see a lot done to it except for adding more c4d's, and even then those aren't rly blended so hotly. Overall i think you should work on ti a bit more to make it rly go with the c4ds.

its lush i like the biggness :) i lovveeeeeeeee itttt



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