kind of dark sig

Please comment so I can improve it :)
I'm not good at brushing and blending... This is my first dark\grunge sig.

ub!k

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...gs/darksig.gif

It scared me when she opened her eyes. And I saw that picture of that girl on DA. She's pretty cute. :D The brushing is ok..not much depth to it. You might also want to adjust the text. I can't read it at all.

oooo i like that, lil big for my taste and ur name doesnt quite fit the theme, but its nice cool work.


EDIT:whoops forgot to say i also like the eye animation.

Thanx for your comments, but how can I add more depth?
And for the text and my name I didn't knew what to do just tried that, gonna change them.

ub!k

i thinks its cool but it needs better text ;)

I changed the text , any better?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6.../SIG-DARK3.gif

Text is way to dark. Get rid of the black around the edges and change the text color.

agree with Juicy , better that first one, but text is too dark make it lighter , its hard to read...

Thanx dick and juicy for your comments, i've lightened the text, hope it's better. But I' will leave it like that for a while , I'm fed up with taht one :)
Thanx again for your usefull advices.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6.../SIG-D2ARK.gif

yeah now its beautifull nice job ;)