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Sorry im so late on the comment. I hope it didn't discourage you.
The first one isnt bad, but the flow isn't working. tehres so many lines going everywhich way it's impossible to focus. Make the effetcs mor eminimal so we want to focus not he render.
Sig 2 is much better.
Theeffects come out of the render, and the BG is decent. i wish it wasnt blurred though, sharpen that make it come out of the BG and accompany the render.
Nice text though the classy font kinda goes well.
You just need to work on depth, Blending and better lighting. ^^
Thanks
Yeah agree. I need to work on that. I can't seem to find any help for it. Any ideas?
blurring + sharpening
lighting can add depth, dodge and burn