and another work from me
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6840/smokegu5.jpg
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and another work from me
http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/6840/smokegu5.jpg
38 views and nothin?
I'll comment! TBH i dont feel like theres a lot to this. It's a leaning cigarrette...yeah. OKay well add some more. RIght now you seem really unhesitant to blend it in our somehting. You only have effects and stuff on the side and like no where else.
Also the font is not working in this case i would have most definetly gone with garamond 8px in a dark gray. It'd work much better and rly set the mood.
overall seems really empty and the effects arent even near the focal. It's too empty.
It's good colours, a bit empty, but the concept is really awesome.
I think you should working on this because it has some good things you can do to it, it's a great idea. :D
