Forward March

Newest since winter break started... overall I'm satisfied with it but I'm not loving the text. Anyways, I've got a lot of other threads to go through :P hope you like it!
p.s. yeah this style is overused and not original but I dunno, I prefer it myself..

v1

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...archcopy-1.jpg

v2 (just changed the colors a little)

http://i299.photobucket.com/albums/m...marchcopy2.jpg

C&C pleaze

V2 is a lot nicer, the first one, the yellow dominates the face too much.

Nice depth and feel on the eyes, maybe try a better light source though.

Love the text.