Dante

C&C pls, Oh btw i never saw dante with flower :D
http://i458.photobucket.com/albums/q...nbuu/Dante.jpg

the sig is too busy and the render is too sharp, it lacks flow overall and some black brushing with a soft brush round the edge is what it needs too look less busy, use c4d's to add flow.

umm is c4d needed?

Maybe try and use one, but be subtle about it. It just adds a bit of flow and depth to your work.

The sig is way too busy and that text is brutal! i would drop the text compeltly. Right now it's murdering the sig.

That flower in the top corner needs to be ersed or somethign too. Right now i cant concentrate on anytthin but that. It seems liek you ahve like 3-4 focals. make them more minimal.