Fallen Warrior

Hey so my first try at anime sigs, never ever made any in my life, this is the first one, so i really need C&C.
http://i458.photobucket.com/albums/q...enWarrior1.jpg

Version 2:
http://i458.photobucket.com/albums/q...enWarrior2.jpg

HOKAI. FIRST: text is just... like... insanely... like... distracting. The effects are nice, I like the right side though the left the motion blurring is just comin' from no where. Lighting is ok, but you've got like 6 sources. The colors are nice but the blue is weird imo. The dots on the right side are a bit out of place since there's none on the left side and there's a lot on the right, though it looks pretty good on the right side. Nice job for a first try :D GO GO GO. mwaha. haha. hah.

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confused boi.





that was spam wasn't it? :(

ADDS CONTENT: I LIKE THE RIGHT SIDE, LEFT SIDE NEEDS A LITTLE WORKs.

Edited with a version 2

I like version 2. It looks alot better with out that motion blur and the extra spots. The first one had too much focus between the text and the character, but the second one has bought it more towards the centre.

Looks good for a first attempt at an anime.

version 2 is mucho better, nice :)