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Third Pic, All advice welcome :D

Need to work on font

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Originally Posted by iPro

Need to work on font

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pretty much, other than that looks good

Uhm, first of all you can't make that render out whatsoever, second of all it is completely monotone, no depth whatsoever. I unno if it's my monitor or something, but I seriously just see alotta red on the right, some black on what looks like the hair of the render in the middle, then some more red on I guess what should be hte renders face, then some more black on ripples on the left with just a lotta red. I'm not to sure what you can do with this to make it better, I guess if you added alotta colour palettes, then take them off, untill you can make out the render, and I guess add a curves layer to try and bring out the backround abit more adding in some depth, sorry I really don't know what went wrong, hopefully someone else can help ya out.

its too red, maybe u used all red stock and c4d, when u use a monotone stock or c4d it spoils the sig as there are no other colors. Do this add some opposite color c4d and some splatter will do As fas as text is concerned, use some dark color coz ur sig is dark. Another thing take a burn toll and brush around the sig so that it focuses mainly on the render.
w8 first make a light source on his back of head and then Filter>>Blur>> Motion blur and make a good angle, then on a new layer make the source somewhat brighter. then apply image and grab the burn tool and brush around the sig. that way more depth wil be added and it wont look too red. For text use some italics as small text.

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Originally Posted by Paraphrased;;

Uhm, first of all you can't make that render out whatsoever, second of all it is completely monotone, no depth whatsoever. I unno if it's my monitor or something, but I seriously just see alotta red on the right, some black on what looks like the hair of the render in the middle, then some more red on I guess what should be hte renders face, then some more black on ripples on the left with just a lotta red. I'm not to sure what you can do with this to make it better, I guess if you added alotta colour palettes, then take them off, untill you can make out the render, and I guess add a curves layer to try and bring out the backround abit more adding in some depth, sorry I really don't know what went wrong, hopefully someone else can help ya out.

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Originally Posted by KidBuu

its too red, maybe u used all red stock and c4d, when u use a monotone stock or c4d it spoils the sig as there are no other colors. Do this add some opposite color c4d and some splatter will do As fas as text is concerned, use some dark color coz ur sig is dark. Another thing take a burn toll and brush around the sig so that it focuses mainly on the render.
w8 first make a light source on his back of head and then Filter>>Blur>> Motion blur and make a good angle, then on a new layer make the source somewhat brighter. then apply image and grab the burn tool and brush around the sig. that way more depth wil be added and it wont look too red. For text use some italics as small text.

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awesome cnc guys!
i can see the render just fine, however it doesnt help that the entire sig is red coloredit makes it harder to see and guives a more bland coloring.

the text is decent but the bg has little to no depth and is raher plain. Also the render isnt blended in very well so, it just doesnt quite flow.

You can see the renders face alright? Like you can make it out as clear as you can make out, say, your sig? Not raggin on his or anything, I can barely make out parts of the renders face like eyes and a mouth, but that's about it. hmmm, very strange on my behalf.

In any affect, follow what these guys are saying and just make a new sig, follow a good tut, we've got tons here at the void, play with it yourself a little bit, and show us the result. Hope our CnC helped out!

I can sort of see where you're coming from, Para.
On you character in that Signature, iPro, i can see an area of high and deep contrast on the bottom where im guessing the shoulders are, but it sort of fades as you reach the face, and it blends more. It kind of works well with the hair - i think - but it's the face! I think the area of high contrast should be the face, and it fades out as you get lower.
...As something to consider, anyway. :)