this is a poster i did for a cousin for his birthday as he asked me to do one for him, he is studying to be a cheff and so i thought it would fit him well as well as i tried to reflect his personality in the poster.
it has allot of sexual xD iconography and symbolism imbued into the piece, its an attempt of me to depict a persons personality in this case my cousin through imagery, and symbolsim hope you like it
http://fc37.deviantart.com/fs39/i/20...rescorpio1.jpg
are you hungry?
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01-11-2009, 06:51 PMFirescorpioare you hungry?
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01-13-2009, 01:09 AMKidBuu
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01-13-2009, 01:20 AMOptiMAT Prime
I think the lower half is really good, shame the plate looks low quality :( too much up-scaling? :p
The top bit looks good too, i'm just not getting the blurriness, it doesn't for me. -
01-13-2009, 01:33 AMPtka
Pretty hot Firescorpio, I do see some of that iconography. :D Sex.
Liking the text, it's got some good compo, just a few minor things draw my attention in a bad way.
1. The left thumb seems to be UNDERNEATH the shadow, that just doesn't work.
2. The figure-eight plates look low quality.
3. Some of the colour from the hand is bleeding onto the text, see: right bottom corner.
Sexy, but just those minor mistakes and it'll be perfect. :P -
01-13-2009, 02:11 AMKidBuu
NICE WORK BUT ERASE SOME DROP SHADOW ON THE PLATES. THEY look like flying lol
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01-13-2009, 12:52 PMDale
I'd use a blending mode on the text, and also you may find this little beauty useful. "Edit -> Transform -> Perspective"
Although you will need to rasterize the layer first!
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01-13-2009, 01:01 PMDaemon
Hmm looks okay i guess, to be honest not a big fan, ehm the hands is for me a retry fire, looks like you did decent on the right hand and then got a little lazy on the other one, i dont think it should be blended in at all ? also i would lower the opacity of the brush strokes on the canvas with all the vegetabels, it looks over done lower it a bit so it looks more realistic. also erase the strokes everywhere else but on the canvaz to make it more realistic, you only done that half if you do it completly it will look better.
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01-13-2009, 05:02 PMFirescorpioQuote:
Originally Posted by Dale
i dont blend text since i use text as a element of itself, its part of the conceptual form of poster making.Quote:
I'd use a blending mode on the text, and also you may find this little beauty useful. "Edit -> Transform -> Perspective"
Although you will need to rasterize the layer first!
as for that yeah i used that for the text thanks for the tip though =P already knew it
yeah you're absolutely right dae i did got lazy xD on the hands, will work it out as soon as i finish something i'm working on =PQuote:
Hmm looks okay i guess, to be honest not a big fan, ehm the hands is for me a retry fire, looks like you did decent on the right hand and then got a little lazy on the other one, i dont think it should be blended in at all ? also i would lower the opacity of the brush strokes on the canvas with all the vegetabels, it looks over done lower it a bit so it looks more realistic. also erase the strokes everywhere else but on the canvaz to make it more realistic, you only done that half if you do it completely it will look better.
