Heroism

Sotw entry
http://i8.photobucket.com/albums/a28...Jr/heroism.jpg
C/C please

dang...is it that bad...haha

the movie sucked ass, so you did better than they did. I wanted to see valkrie but it was filled up we went to go see the spirit, ended up walking out it was so bad.

The text on this needs work. Drop the gfradient map.
The birghten effect around his body arent helping the blending drop that and add some better blending.

The lighting on this is way off and i dont understad what the random white spots on top and left are.

needs better compo, you disregaruded the rule of thirds compleltly, and overall it just isnt interesting..
sry bud, but not to good. ive seen better from you

ummm
the white splatter does not fit in coz there is no blending of the render. the whiteness around the render is quite distracting. Try for a light source only on one side. say top left. the text is good if u match it right now with the sig colors

the white spots are from the picture....its not a render its a stock, the stock picture has them white spots in it, i thought it added more detail instead of being a bit bland but yea your right should of took them outta there.thanks