Need your opinion on these-thanks!

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Yes, the gundam one some of you have probably already seen in the gift section (ppl are still welcome to it) i just needed some input on it XD and this new one i made

I m not satistfied with u for the first one m8
looking at ur works u posted in the intro section i think u can do much better
I mean look at it it looks unfinished and still wip. I dont like how the c4d is coming over it. Erase some of it man. I know u want to cr8 awesome effects but there are lotsa ways to do that. Not this this is sheer not good work.

Secondone is somewhat good. But actually i really dont know whats happening there
imean the render is looking like a c4d coz i see no face of gundam thereXD (sry for it coz i nvr saw the anime and if that is some form of robot :p)
There is no flow but u tried to cr8 one with yellow soft round brush with splatter XD

Anyways keepit up and coming :)

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Originally Posted by valorNstrife

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This one... I like it overall in that it has some serious potential. However, here are some tips from my point of view:

Erase the Light Texture/whatever covering his face. Blend it as it goes to his hair because it's okay to be there, but it's really distracting when it covers Akuma's eyes etc.

I like the effects, they fit well, but your smudging is way too "focused" there. It should blend more with the black. Easy to do, just Duplicate and smudge again outwards to get more texture. If you're going to have such a strong Central line, make the rest a bit more interesting, too. However, i would fade some edges of what you have there as well, to make it surround Akuma a bit better, and not just be a solid line.

Like the "heat spots" effect though. Looks cool.