Bored

Did this while i had spare time, :S been wrapped up in coursework and GCSE's so :D

C&C Please

http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/538...ature90vw0.png

Thanks
Dan.

This is exactly the reason why i hardly come on here any more... everyone elses posts gets comments but ive had 24 views and 0 comments...

That's because ur unbelievably noob :') xD

no:P

kinda nice

thats czo i wasnt here xD

that a nice tag. i like it how the lightning effects used.

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Originally Posted by zole

This is exactly the reason why i hardly come on here any more... everyone elses posts gets comments but ive had 24 views and 0 comments...

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mainly cause after every tag you revert back to your old ways.
not to be harsh but theres only so many times i can repeat myself.

The extreme amounts of blackening around the edges need to go they ruin the BG and look lazy.
The extreme amounts of blurring need to go. i don't know what else i can say aside from that. look at your other threads and look at what i said...it's basically the same. :|

nice text.

Edit:
Zole: your a great artist but you really dont ever keep in mind cnc of past sigs when your doign your new sigs.

1. the blur was already on the BG of the stock
2. the black is there because the stock wasnt wide enough so i had to blend it some how, i didnt really want to show a clipping mask there to try and make a new BG because it would look strange on the tag. Here are some other tags

http://img145.imageshack.us/img145/4...ature91nf8.png

http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/3...ature89ow3.png

ok

1st tag at the top: black at the edges = BAD. you can use the smudge tool you know, to blend stocks together, OR you could simply erase the edges of the stock on top to blend into the stock/s behind it. Anything but the black.
I also don't know why you have to do "Smoke that shit" i mean, ok, whatever, im just bein picky but it makes the sig look a little less refined if you get what i mean. Otherwise the text looks ok.. a little big, it looks like its trying to cover something up just as much as the black on the sides is.

Sig 2: much better, i like the effects. Needs some depth imo, the hand seems to be like scrunched up against his body. The text, again, needs some work.

Sig 3: Now, if you're going to use black on the edges, THAT is how you do it. Minimalistic, not distracting and it has some texture to it, looks like smoke. The lighting is a little blunt and doesn't fit the direction of the natural lighting of the render/stock, though the color of the lighting is really nice. The effects on the hands look half-assed, nice concept but not very well executed. Spend some more time on those, right now they just look like a bunch of c4d's slapped on there. The text, baad. Dont let it cover the render, one, and i can barely read it, two. Try the left side of Spidey instead of the right.

Pay attention to your c&c and people might find you worth c&c'ing, just a friendly reminder.