Starlight

http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/2...ingcopyuv1.jpg

i think it is one of my bad pieces so cnc please, this is kinda my old style.
The orb was handdrawn.

its good simple and energetic except its too bright and lacking depth

I totaly dissagree the brightness and depth is perfect.

Would not change anything.

I agree with Bones on the lighting --

-- but, what is up with the focal blur on the leg? it makes the leg look really weird. I'm a big fan of your stuff, in truth, but that weird leg is killing this one.

I'd definitely agree with OptiMat Prime here, if you had the same amount of detail in the left leg as you have in the right, then it'd have far much more balance.

The blur in the leg throws it off definitely.

Its not too bright but it lacks contrast. Pretty sweet tag though.

thanks for comments all
i wasnt expecting the blurred leg as being a downside but looking at it today it does look kinda wierd, i was just trying to create depth and also if you notice the red, if you invert it it is the background colour

Really nice.
The colors really go well together I think.
Maybe switch the blur on the legs, since technically her right leg (background) seems farther away than her left (foreground), so that should look a little more blurry I think.

Very cool though.

Looks like you got text down pretty good too (on this and your currents).