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Technically theres nothign rly wrong with this. It's just rly busy. I like the color better.
Try and on down some of the effects. Also i reccomend some more contrast. try and add in some linear dodge glows or something cause right now it's kind of bland. it's rly a solid sig but overall just bland.
i agree with papa on that one solid build and such just a bit busy and lacking that final luster :)
needs more that one colour, good flow, needs more lighting and something to slightly dstract or add to the focal
thank you :)
